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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What stays with me here is the exhaustion beneath the poem. Not only anger at prices or politics, but the slow erosion of ordinary dignity when survival begins taking all of a person’s energy.

The strongest lines are the simplest ones, because they don’t exaggerate anything. They just stay close to the reality of people working constantly while feeling life move further out of reach.

Kathryn F's avatar

Health becomes more and more important as I age. I don’t eat processed foods. I buy organic as much as I can. But after paying for food each week, I have very little left for other things in life — things that I really enjoy. Your poetry expressed the frustration so well.

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