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Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

April, this poem carries a real sense of wonder, especially in the way you let the cosmos feel alive with possibility rather than empty distance. The images of blue forests, crimson skies, frozen moons, and electric atmospheres give the poem its imaginative breadth, while the question of the soul gives it its emotional center. What feels most meaningful is the longing underneath it: the hope that life, connection, and light are larger than what we can see from one small place. Thank you for writing with such openness to mystery, beauty, and the ache of wanting the universe to feel less lonely.

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Very lovely, and I agree. 😍

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